Appendix 1 Appendix 1 Language Difficulties and Types of Error The purpose of this Appendix is to examine some of the common types of error that are often made by students when writing formal or academic English. The first step is to be aware that an error has been made; t~e second step is to recognise or identify it; the third step is to correct it. Of course, it is far better not to make an error in the first place! If you look carefully at what follows it should help you not to make some of the mistakes in your wntmg. Section 1 Errors and Causes A Some common causes of error 1 Probably the biggest cause of error is literal translation from your own language into English. If you try to translate word for word you will make mistakes. . For example) in Nepali, the sentence John said nothing would be rendered as (translated) John nothing spoke. It is easy to see that when translating into English the word order and the sentence structure could cause difficulties, and also the vocabulary. Advice;' .'Tryto remerrib~i: English~~~tence patterns when you read them; then usethem'inyourwriting'.. ,;~, ", ,.;:~".. ,q '. " .' ,", . . "'."'.',.,." "'" 2 If you write in long complex sentences, it is easier to make mistakes: the sentence becomes complicated and the subject and verb tenses may become confused. Advice: TrYto write !n fai~lyshort sentel1ce~'~r,haps at most about three lin:~) until y~u are confidenq~i3~ t~~rei3{~!'I° ~i~a~es., . ".' . ".,' , ""'-" '. ",' ,_. .., . 3 If you try to write English in the same way as you speak it, you will probably write in the wrong style. Spoken language is often informal. Academic writing is normally rather formal. . ., , " . . .-.;,..." ..,-, . . '. ,., " Advice: . TrY'torecognise a formal style'of'Writi'ng and use it. Do not mix it ',,; , \Nit~an informal style., ,C;:'L'~r(i!,~(\":::, :> . B Some common types of error 1 Subject and verb agreement (i.e. concord); particularly singular and plural subject with the correct verb form. E.g. they were (not they was). (See Section 2 below.) 2 The use of s at the end of the third person singular, present simple tense (i.e. stem + s). E.g. the writer says (not the writer say), 3 - This + singular noun, these + plural noun; - Other and another differences. 126 Appendix 1 Uncountable nouns. are often wrongly used (as if they were countable nouns). E.g. This information is useful (not These informations are useful). ' When the impersonal It or There subject should be used, it is often wrongly omined. E.g. It seems we should. . . (not Seems that we . . .). 4 5 6 Verb tense uses are confused, particularly the present continuous (used tOo frequently) and present simple. E.g. I work in the library every day (not I am working in . . .). The formation of some verb forms is not known, particularly the present passive. The formation of the past tenses of irregular ver?s also callses difficulty. 7 8 9 No and not differences in negative structures. The formation and use of some of the comparative and superlative forms of adjectives and adverbs are not known. (See Unit 8, and below.) - some prepositions: (e.g. in, on, at, for) - the articles: a/an/the - relative pronouns: who, which - possessive adjectives: his, her, their 11 Confusion over the choice of vocabulary, e.g. make and do. The choice of synonyms will often depend on usage (or context) as much as on meaning. (See Section.4 below.) 10 The correct use of 12 Spelling mistakes. (See Unit 18.) C Practice in areas of language difficulty 1 Each time you do an exercise and practise the language you should be as accurate as possible: copy carefully. 2 If you make a mistake, learn from it. Try not to repeat an error. 3 Do not forget the seemingly simple or obvious elements of writing, e.g. write as legibly or clearly as possible. Remember, if someone cannot read your writing, it does not matter how accurate it is! 4 Check your punctuation: if you have used a full-stop (.) it indicates the end of a sentence and immediately after it the next sentence will begin with a capital letter. Do not mix capital letters and small letters within a word: it gives the impression that you are uneducated! 5 6 Remember to divide your writing into paragraphs: it makes it easier to read and creates a better impression. 127 - ., 11 I I I I I I I J f" o,ndix 1 Section 2 Subject-Verb Concord A The s is often wrongly forgotten in the 3rd person singular of the present tense, i.e. the stem + s, e.g. not The student attend the language course and he study hard. It should be attends and studies. B Frequently has and have are used wrongly, e.g. not The course have taught me a lot. Here it should be has. C Mistakes are also made with is and are, and was and were, e.g. not Jose and Eduardo is from Mexico; not Some students was .Iate this morning. It should be are and were. D Another common mistake is with do and does, especially in negative sentences, e.g. not He don't study Chemistry, he study Physics. It should be doesn't (or does not) study and studies. , I You must be careful to look at the subject of the verb, decide if it is singular or plural and then choose the appropriate verb form: Stem + s, has, is, was or does, if singular (all end in s). Stem, have, are, were or do, if plural. . Other points to note E look at this sentence: The number of students on the course is less than last year. Here the ~ubject is the number of students on the course but the main word is number. Therefore the verb must be singular is. Often a mistake is made by using the plural verb (are in this case) because of the influence of a plural noun (students). F Some nouns which are grammatically singular may be followed by a plural verb form. These are often called collective nouns. E.g. The government have taken an important decision. The England football team were beaten by Italy. The class have a test on Friday. With collective nouns in their singular form it is usually possible to use either a singular verb or a plural verb. Therefore, The government has taken. . . The England football team was beaten. . . The class has a test. . . G learn by heart these examples: 1 Almost always singular (i.e. verb in singular form): news, information, music, mathematics, phonetics, the United States, advice, evidence, accommodation, equipment. e.g The news was very good. 2 Usually singular aid, research e.g. His research is progressing very well. 3 Always plural (i.e. verb in plural form): people, police, cattle. e.g. The police are doing their best to control the traffic. 128 Ir.oJ Appendix 1 4 Singular and plural (i.e. these words do not change; bur the verb may be singular or plural according to the meaning): means, series, species, sheep, aircraft. e.g. The series of experiments that he conducted was very successful. Several species of butterfly are in danger of dyi~g out. Section 3 Comparisons A Formation 1 The regular comparative and superlative forms of adjectives ana adverbs are formed as follows: a by adding the endings -er and -est to words with one syllable. b by placing the words more and most in front of words with three or more syllables. c words with tWosyllables may be like a or b above: . Generally they will add the ending -er and -est if they end in: -y or -ly e.g. funny (funnier, funniest); friendly (friendlier, friendliest) But adverbs ending in -ly take more and most. e.g. quickly (more quickly, most quickly) -ow e.g. narrow (narrower, narrowest) -le e.g. able (abler, ablest) -er e.g. clever (cleverer, cleverest) . Most of the remaining words take more and most: e.g. careful (more careful, most careful) . Some common tWo-syllable adjectives can have either type of comparison: common, handsome, polite, quiet. e.g. polite politer politest more polite most polite 2 Irregular comparison is made by: a a small group of very frequent adjectives: e.g. bad worse worst far further/farther furthest/farthest good better best many more most b a small group of adverbs: e.g. badly worse little less much more worst least most 129 a word lengrh adjective or comparative superlative adverb one syllable new newer newest soon sooner soonest three syllables easily more easily most easily or more convenient more convement most convenient Appendix 1 , I B Use in sentence coostruction There are a number of constructions using cqmparisons. Some of the commonest ones are shown below in sen,tences: 1 Showing equivalence (i.e. the same) a' Ann is as clever as Tom. b This book is 'the same price as that one. , c There are as many students in this room as in the other one. ' d There is as much liquid in the first test-'tube as in the second. ' 2 Showing non-equivalence (i.e. not the same) a The medical library is not as/so big as the science Iibrary. b John's essay was longer than Peter's. ," c However, Peter's essay was more carefully written than John;s'and contained fewer mistakes (than John's). ' d There were not as many students in the seminar as at the lecture. ' e The student did not do as much homework as his teacher had hoped. f This problem is less difficult than the previous one. 3 Showing one iterh compared with a number (i.e. the superlative) a He scored the highest marks in the annual examination. b The most convenient time for him to see his tutor was in the early afternoon. c Some economists find that the least interesting part of their subject is statistics. 4 Showing parallel increase (i.e. two comparatives) The bigger the problem (was), the more interesting he found It. , . Note:.), A common, mistake is to confuse and mix some of the ';,1 ,}:.!.:~~:;::constructions. ~roducing. for example. the wrong construction , ." , more. . . as whICh should be more. . . than. ':" ."':,,, Jr';': ~:':-': , See the list of recommended books for further expla~ation and practice at the end of this Appendix. Section 4 Vocabulary Vocabulary is a very large subject. It really requires a book to itself; in other words a dictionary. In fact, a good monolingual English dictionary is the best book that you, as a student of English, can buy. Recommended ones, specially compiled for the student of English are listed in Unit 8. A dictionary of synonyms (or a thesaurus) can also be helpful, if used with care. Often a wrong word is used because a wrong choice has been made between similar words or synonyms. The choice of synonyms will often depend on usage, or context, as much as on meaning. A good English dictionary will give examples of usage or context that will help you to choose the correct word. Some attention is given below to a few words that frequently cause difficulty to students. Read the information and examples carefully. 130 -- - -- --"'\4, A Verbs I Make and Do The basic meanings are: make: construct, produce, form, shape, create~ do: perform, carry out, act. However, there are large lists of idiomatic expressions containing these rwo verbs; they can be found in the dictionaries referred to above. look at these examples. Considerable progress has been made with the experiment. He found that he could not do the research. He made a number of attempts to finish the work. She had some difficulty in doing her homework. Many discoveries have been made this century. 2 Rise, Arise, Raise, Increase rise: (intransitive, i.e. without direct object) go up, get up, go higher. , e.g. Prices continue to rise. The cost of living index rose by'lO% last year. The sun usually rises at 5 a.m. in the summer. " ..,... '; , N6te:\1 Rise is also a>Roun. meaning increase. ';Hf;k,p\i;, e.g. There was a rise in prices caused by a'rise in wages. arise: (intransitive) come into existence, appear. e.g. A new problem has arisen in the college. An unexpected difficulty arose when he was analysing the results. raise: (transitive, i.e. takes a direct object) lift up, make higher, cause to flse. e.g. Bus fares were raised three times last year. The landlord said he is going to raise the rent. Also - to bring up for discussion or attention. e.g. He raised a new point in the seminar. - to manage to get; obtain. e.g. He raised a loan. He tried to raise money for a new project. increase: (transitive and intransitive) make or become greater in size, number, degree, ete. e.g. The Chancellor of the Exchequer increased the tax on petrol in his last Budget. The population has increased by 200,000 to a total of 50 million. I I I I I I ,~ 'Note:' :', ..' 1 'Increase can 'sometimes be used instead of raise or rise. e.g. In the above two sentences raised could be used in the first and has risen in the second. 2 Increase is also a noun, meaning rise. e.g. There was a steady increase in population. 131 I ~ r: rI ~ 'pendix 1 B Pairs of words often confused VERB practise advise affect choose NOUN politics mathematics statistics logic economics ADJECTIVE political mathematical statistical logical economic NOUN practice advice effect choice ~ 11 ~ 11 11 11, I I ADJECTIVE loose VERB lose C British words and American equivalents Occasionally confusion can be caused by being unaware that there are some differences between British and American words. GoodI English learners' dictionaries give the American equivalents of the British words. Some examples are given below. 11 11'1 Section 5 Recommended Books The following books are recommended for further explanation and practice: Longman Dictionary of Common Errors N.D. Turton & J.B. Heaton (Longman). Right Word Wrong Word L.G. Alexander (Longman). An A-Z of English Grammar and Usage G. Leech (Longman). Practical English Usage M. Swan (Oxford University Press). English Grammar in Use R. Murphy (Cambridge University Press). Oxford Practice Grammar J. Eastwood (Oxford University Press). A University Grammar of English R. Quirk & S. Greenbaum (Longman). A Communicative Grammar of English G. Leech & J. Svartvik (Longman). An Introduction to English Grammar S. Greenbaum (Longman). Longman Essential Activator (Longman). 132 UK USA UK USA aeroplane airplarie rubbish garbage/trash autumn fall tap faucet chemist's drugstore timeta ble schedule cityltown tin can centre downtown torch flashlight flat apartment trousers pa nts full stop period vest undershirt pa vement sidewalk waistcoat vest rubber eraser